I am a Year 6 student and Kaikohe West School in Northland, NZ. I am in Room 4 and my teachers are Miss Smith and Miss Nicola.
Kia Ora Jordan. What a cool piece of writing. It reminds me about my experiences of summer. Your writing made me feel really hot and it made me think about a time I jumped off a rock at the Twin Bridges years ago. I liked how descriptive your writing was too. It really made some good images in my head when I read it. Keep up the awesome writing.
Awesome jordz hopefully your mum takes you some where cool like that next school holidays...keep posting and letting us know what youve been doing...love your cousins in tasmania niah, emma and mia and uncle honz
Hi Jordan Mmm your third slide made me think about yummy hash browns - but then it also made me think about how a hash brown is cooked in hot hot oil!!! Geesh you must have been really thinking about how hot your body gets during summer time. I wish the sun was out now because I'm freezing.Thank you for sharing your work with us Jordan.
You did a relay good job
Hay Jordan, I like the way you described about being like a hash brown and it makes me really hungry for some. But next time can you make your writing a little bit shorter for me please. It is to long on the first slide.